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Long Way Down, page 57

5th Oct 2015, 5:48 AM in Long Way Down
Long Way Down, page 57

Author Notes

Zomburai 5th Oct 2015, 5:48 AM edit delete
Looks like Alessa is safe! ... but where did that colorful chick vanish to ...?


Looks like I'll be attending Central City Comic Con in Yakima, WA on October 24-25! Come visit me! I'll be doing free sketches and selling prints and copies of EvAb books 1 and 3!


See you on Friday, everyone!


KarToon12 5th Oct 2015, 8:20 AM edit delete reply
*breathes a half sigh of relief*

Glad she's okay...but yeah, where did "lady randomly in color" disappear to? D:
Zomburai 5th Oct 2015, 12:07 PM edit delete reply
Hmmmmmmmm! :P
ghostwhitehorse 5th Oct 2015, 10:45 AM edit delete reply
Figured that window would be important. . .though I was kinda expecting something along the lines of KATE+Thermal Scope+APDS.
Zomburai 5th Oct 2015, 12:10 PM edit delete reply
Considered it, Horse, but settled on the jump through the window for storytelling reasons. I even was playing with a sequence of how the lady appeared in the thermal that I hope I can use in another chapter!

What's KATE stand for?
ghostwhitehorse 7th Oct 2015, 5:22 AM edit delete reply
Bravo 51 sniper rifle. . .specifically the one Gibbs uses.
Zomburai 7th Oct 2015, 8:14 AM edit delete reply

Funnily enough, Morna's weapon of choice is a sniper rifle. I modeled her weapon up there after the Barrett M95 (though it probably ended up smaller than the real-life version).
Delta-v 5th Oct 2015, 6:48 PM edit delete reply
All the action I could have hoped for, but strangely incomplete. Too perfectly executed, too anticlimactic for Nick, one too many ends left untied....this fight ain't over yet. ^^

I'm guessing that the missing conspirator is of infernal origin, which should make an interesting confrontation for later. :)
Zomburai 6th Oct 2015, 5:24 AM edit delete reply
Well ... it was intended to be a little anticlimactic ... >_>

The missing conspirator's role in this should be clear by the end of the chapter!
duLapel 5th Oct 2015, 10:49 PM edit delete reply
*sigh* Just in the Nick of time... -_^

Well now... with the Agency with it's Stealth Cowboy tactics stealing any chance Nick had with redemption with his ken...
The girl is saved... Hooray! And in real life, they would have lost one of their most useful soldiers... who knows how the story will resolve... All I can say is this is just wrong :/

Zomburai 6th Oct 2015, 5:31 AM edit delete reply
... must ... not ... chuckle ... at ... pun!

In real life, I think the Agency lost one of their soldiers the moment he suckerpunched one of their agents and stole an invaluable artifact.

I've got a lot of thoughts on this that I'll share at the end of the chapter, which is ... six or seven pages, give or take? It's coming up fast.