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Promise, page 31

10th Dec 2012, 5:05 AM in Promise
Promise, page 31

Author Notes

Zomburai 10th Dec 2012, 5:05 AM edit delete
Zomburai
I'm really happy with how this turned out. Like, really happy. Trying a new storytelling technique and having it work out is one of the most gratifying parts of making a webcomic.

Have a good week, peeps!


Comments


Draginbeard 10th Dec 2012, 6:48 AM edit delete reply
Draginbeard
It really is a good page, watching him squirm is hilarious!

So whats this new storytelling technique? *Stares at you*
Zomburai 10th Dec 2012, 6:56 AM edit delete reply
Zomburai
The, uh, having the giant-ass picture of Lilith in the background serving as panels 5 & 10.

It's new to me, anyway...
Draginbeard 10th Dec 2012, 8:00 AM edit delete reply
Draginbeard
Ah, I had thought you had come across some ancient scroll or something that helped you do your writing... still a good job you did with this page, but I was hoping you had a gold spinning dwarf, or shoe elf to help do some pages for you when you sleep. I would have wanted to borrow one.
Zomburai 11th Dec 2012, 4:40 AM edit delete reply
Zomburai
The gold-spinning dwarves are mine! You can't have them! D:<
AngryRob 10th Dec 2012, 8:59 AM edit delete reply
AngryRob
I wish I could draw facial expressions like you, Zomb.
Zomburai 11th Dec 2012, 4:41 AM edit delete reply
Zomburai
Thanks, man! I'll give you a tip: it involves a lot (like a lot) of erasing and redrawing.
KarToon12 10th Dec 2012, 9:56 AM edit delete reply
KarToon12
I really like the layout of this page. And it makes me wonder if she's just a good interrogator, or if this is some special ability of hers? Like, she stares at someone and can get them to tell the truth?
Zomburai 11th Dec 2012, 4:46 AM edit delete reply
Zomburai
Hmm, you know? Hmmmmm.
CyberSkull 10th Dec 2012, 7:59 PM edit delete reply
CyberSkull
Dat smirk! ¬_¬
Zomburai 11th Dec 2012, 4:48 AM edit delete reply
Zomburai
SURGEON GENERAL'S WARNING: Exposure to Lilith's smirk can result in feelings of inadequacy, pangs of guilt, and acute paranoia.
CyberSkull 11th Dec 2012, 10:44 PM edit delete reply
CyberSkull
I'm not feeling so good. *sniff*
Peter Palmiotti 1st May 2013, 2:17 AM edit delete reply
Peter Palmiotti
This page shouts great storytelling! Well done.
Zomburai 1st May 2013, 4:08 AM edit delete reply
Zomburai
Thanks, man! This one was easily my favorite of the chapter... maybe so far.