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Long Way Down, page 51

14th Sep 2015, 9:26 PM in Long Way Down
Long Way Down, page 51

Author Notes

Zomburai 14th Sep 2015, 9:26 PM edit delete
Zomburai
... still ... made it ... still ... Monday!

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I am noticing every continuity error and visual mistake this whole chapter, from Nick's disappearing buttons on his bulletproof vest to confusing "Philadelphia" and "Pittsburgh" a few pages ago.

Kill me.

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See you on Friday!


Comments


AngryRob 14th Sep 2015, 9:37 PM edit delete reply
AngryRob
it's Tuesday here
Zomburai 14th Sep 2015, 10:09 PM edit delete reply
Zomburai
Time zones, Rob
melaredblu 14th Sep 2015, 11:34 PM edit delete reply
melaredblu
"This is an intervention."
"What?! I'm not even addicted to anything!"
"We know. We really just want you to wash that blood off your hand. Seriously, dude. Gross."
Zomburai 15th Sep 2015, 5:13 AM edit delete reply
Zomburai
"I washed it like six times at Donato's apartment! It didn't even come off with Ajax! #sadface D:>"
KarToon12 15th Sep 2015, 8:31 AM edit delete reply
KarToon12
I was about to make an intervention joke, but melaredblu beat me to it. XDXD

Seriously though, I wasn't joking on my previous comment; this IS my hometown we're in. It makes me more excited. :D
Zomburai 15th Sep 2015, 6:42 PM edit delete reply
Zomburai
"Nick, first of all: this is a safe space. We all love you, here. But we need to talk about your maiming problem."

Well, I kind of wish I knew you were from Pittsburgh, PA beforehand. I might have made a point to spend more time here! :P