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Long Way Down, page 56

2nd Oct 2015, 6:33 AM in Long Way Down
Long Way Down, page 56

Author Notes

Zomburai 2nd Oct 2015, 6:33 AM edit delete
Zomburai
Ffffuuuuuuuck, I am so far behind...

Can't stay to chat, I gotta get to work! I may update this space later.

If I don't, see you all on Monday!


Comments


KarToon12 2nd Oct 2015, 7:22 AM edit delete reply
KarToon12
*on the edge of my seat* 0.0
Zomburai 2nd Oct 2015, 6:41 PM edit delete reply
Zomburai
:D
Delta-v 2nd Oct 2015, 6:13 PM edit delete reply
I thought Antonio was EXPECTING Nick to show up. I guess I missed something somewhere. :(
Zomburai 2nd Oct 2015, 6:48 PM edit delete reply
Zomburai
Antonio wanted Nick to dead drop the compass at a different location to keep his identity concealed. Reading back through the early pages I totally see where I should have made that clearer. I'm going to edit the dialogue on this page this weekend just to alleviate confusion ... there's a lot of ambiguity in this chapter that I think helps the reading experience, but this isn't part of it.

Thanks for saying something, Delta!