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EvAb Short 3 - Making the Move

13th Nov 2015, 7:28 AM in Shorts and Extras
EvAb Short 3 - Making the Move

Author Notes

Zomburai 13th Nov 2015, 7:28 AM edit delete
Zomburai
how do i dialogue help

(Gabriele's German dialogue might be even clunkier, thanks to Google translate. Wished I'd planned ahead and gotten an actual German speaker to help.)

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This page takes place a couple of weeks before Uche and Gabriele uncover the mole back in Personal Spaces!

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See you on Monday!


Comments


Theeds 13th Nov 2015, 8:43 AM edit delete reply
Gabriele is a brave woman to wander the ancient temple in a bikini top. Who knows what kind of insects waited within to find purchase on uncovered flesh. Skittering. Scurrying. Burrowing. So many little legs and mandibles.
Zomburai 13th Nov 2015, 11:22 AM edit delete reply
Zomburai
Gabby is nothing but brave. This excludes smart :P
Selentic 13th Nov 2015, 11:04 AM edit delete reply
Truly! In my headcanon they were on a cruise (in the Caspian?) and somehow got shanghaied into a Mongol copy of Qin Shi Huangdi's crypt...
Zomburai 13th Nov 2015, 11:22 AM edit delete reply
Zomburai
This would not be the weirdest start to an adventure the Agency has ever had :P
KarToon12 13th Nov 2015, 6:10 PM edit delete reply
KarToon12
They look like they're doing that famous kiss with the WWII nurse and sailor in that last panel. XD
melaredblu 13th Nov 2015, 11:55 PM edit delete reply
melaredblu
Maybe wait until you're out of the crowd that could possibly unfreeze without warning when you're not looking? Just throwing that out there.
Muchacho NL 14th Nov 2015, 4:52 AM edit delete reply
Muchacho NL
When a woman says "I wish you would kiss me right now" you friggin' kiss her right now.
Zomburai 14th Nov 2015, 9:14 AM edit delete reply
Zomburai
Muchacho: Though Uche doesn't speak German ... (looks like they both got lucky in every sense of that phrase :P)
Muchacho NL 15th Nov 2015, 10:00 AM edit delete reply
Muchacho NL
Wasn't he trying to learn? Or was that in "Personal Spaces"?

EDIT: But even then, he'd probably understand the word 'kussen' ;)
Zomburai 15th Nov 2015, 11:50 AM edit delete reply
Zomburai
This takes place just a couple weeks before Personal Spaces C:
Muchacho NL 15th Nov 2015, 12:49 PM edit delete reply
Muchacho NL
I know, I just thought he was learning German earlier. :)
Zomburai 14th Nov 2015, 9:13 AM edit delete reply
Zomburai
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Willibald 16th Nov 2015, 6:44 AM edit delete reply
#1 Ich war nicht sicher, ob das funktionieren würde.
#2 ich wünschte, Du würdest mich jetzt küssen.
Zomburai 16th Nov 2015, 9:14 AM edit delete reply
Zomburai
Willibald, you are my damn hero. I'mma change this as soon as I can.